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 Rawr Rar
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  Posted 31/07/2007 02:24:37 PM
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so i started writing a bit of it, hopefully ill finish it sometime this week..

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 Colour Me Stupid
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  Posted 01/08/2007 12:58:54 AM
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Yay!  Can't wait!

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 Rawr Rar
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  Posted 08/08/2007 08:34:13 PM
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Chapter 14

What the hell was going on?! I called Tre, and told him what Billie just said, and drove to the farm. I saw Billie waiting for me by his car, and Tre was nearby.

"Billie, what's going on?!"

"Remember Allie's stepfather? Well, he apparently kidnapped her, and is holding her here." said Billie, furious.

"Shit. Well what should we do? I mean we can't barge into the barn just like that and take her away! You can get hurt!" I exclaimed.

"It's a risk I'm willing to take," said Billie through gritted teeth, and ran to the barn before I could stop him.
Sigh, Billie can be stubborn sometimes. I chased after him.

"Shit! The fucker locked the door!" shouted Billie.

Allie P.O.V.

Huh? Where am I? I looked around. I'm in some sort of barn. What am I doing here? I tried to get up, but couldn’t. What the hell, some one has tied me up!

I heard something move. I looked around but no one was there.

"Who's there?" I asked, terrified.

"I see you're awake....excellent," drifted a voice from the shadows. Not any voice, a familiar voice. Oh no. It's him, my stepfather, Steve, the person who killed my mom.

"What do you want from me Steve?" I spat.

"Oh don't you know? I guess it runs in the family. Your bitch of a mother didn’t know what I was doing either, when all the proof was right in front of her eyes." he said, and came out of the shadows.

"Don’t you talk shit about my mother you bastard!" I shouted.

"So it seems that you are still the same ignorant little bitch. It seems that my attempts at making you stop using those filthy words haven't been useful,"

"If they are filthy words why are you using them too? And what do you want from me?"

Just before he could answer me, I heard a thump coming from the door.

"Shit! The fucker locked the door!"

That's dad! He's coming to save me! Oh no. He's coming to save me. Shit. Steve would kill him too if he tried to save me. I had to stop him.

I tried to free myself from the ropes around me, but I couldn’t, it was too tight. Then I got an idea. I flattened myself on the floor and started crawling to the door, while my stepfather rushed to the door too.

As I got nearer, I started shouting.

"DAD GO AWAY! HE'LL TRY TO KILL YOU IF YOU TRY TO SAVE ME!" I shouted.

I just hope he does as I tell him.

Billie P.O.V.

I fiddled with the door, but I couldn’t open it. I heard movement from inside.

"DAD GO AWAY! HE'LL TRY TO KILL YOU IF YOU TRY TO SAVE ME!" I heard Allie scream.
I can't leave her. If I leave her then he will kill her. Shit.

"Hey guys sorry I'm late!" called a running Tre. "So this is where he is holding her?"
I nodded.

"Shit. Well Billie, move aside, I'm going to break the door down." said Tre, stepping in front of the door, and taking a couple of steps backward.

"What will you –" CRASH. Tre collided with the door, which made it break.

"Don't worry about me Billie, just go and grab her," said Tre before I could ask. I did as he said, and went inside.

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 Colour Me Stupid
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  Posted 09/08/2007 10:17:36 AM
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Ohhh!  A very intense chapter, I love it!

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 x_GD Freak_x
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  Posted 11/08/2007 02:10:18 PM
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oooo cant wait for the next one ...... THAT WAS VERY HEROIC OF TRE

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 sarah
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  Posted 12/08/2007 04:55:39 PM
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wow, this is really good Rara.

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 x_GD Freak_x
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  Posted 16/09/2007 09:20:44 AM
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umm... when are you gonna finish the next chapter?

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 Colour Me Stupid
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  Posted 16/09/2007 05:08:26 PM
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Rara, will there be an update soon?

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 x_GD Freak_x
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  Posted 23/09/2007 01:24:42 PM
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yeah when r u gonna update?

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