Okay, while I was writing a story that I might post soon, this thought kept bugging me and I couldn’t concentrate. So I wrote it. I remember reading a oneshot that was almost exactly like this, so if you ever read it, that’s were I got the idea from. Comments are love, praise or punishment. This is a oneshot, basically so you can get the idea as to my writing style.

Tell Me A Lie (Oneshot)

Billie pressed his lips against Adrienne’s neck as he led her to the bed. Adrienne moaned. She loved him so much. Billie giggled and started to make his way to her lips. She moaned again and took her hand and rubbed it against Billie’s crotch, which made Billie’s erection bigger than it already was. He took his hands and caressed his wife, causing her to moan even louder than before. Suddenly she stopped, which confused Billie.

“Uh, Adie, why’d you stop?”

She didn’t know why, exactly. A thought burst in her head, and she couldn’t help but ask.

“Sorry Billie, I just thought about this, and it may sound weird, but could you tell me a lie?”

“Why would you want me to lie? It should be the other way around.”

“Come on, the sooner you tell me a lie the sooner we can get back to what we were doing.”

“Uh…why?”

“Billie, just do it, for me?”

She was getting a little aggravated with him, all he had to do is say something that wasn’t true at all and they could continue what they were doing.

“Uh, alright, if you say so.”

“Okay, go ahead.”

Billie thought, trying to think of a lie. Suddenly one hit him on the head that he couldn’t resist to turn away. So he said it.

“You want me to tell you a lie, eh?”

“Yes, Billie, tell me a lie.”

"Alright.”

He took a deep breath.

"I love you."

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Yes, I know, it’s very short. That’s why it’s an oneshot. Tell me if you think I need any improvements, or anything. I think I got to the point to fast, but oh well. I think I have too many way too short sentences....

I don't know if this belonged in the finished fan fics, since this is the only part. Move it if you like.  

--Last edited by in the parking lot on 2007-01-10 22:17:08 --

*CRIES* lol
Billie hates 80?
WHY!!!!!
WAAAAA!!!!!
LOL

AAH
Oh wow
WOW
So Billie doesn't love her?
SEX SCENE
WOOT
Anyway..
Is this all your writing cuz if you are done with it, I'll move it
Its very good though, I love it
<3

yeah that's all of it, I wasn't sure so go ahead and move it.

oh and thanks guys for the comments<33

of course
I like it a lot, very...dramatic
<3

lol yeah.

Ohhh!  I loved it!  It is very sad though.

thank you Faye<33

Welcome!  You should be a professional one shot writer.

yeah, if you can write one shots like this all the time, that would be amazing

wow, thanks guys. It means a lot. I might just write another...

OOH, OOH, OOH!!! DO IT, DO IT!!!! *spazes*

haha alright.

OOH! YAY!!

WOOTage!  Yay!  I'm all excited now!

haha, wootage! LOL

i can't wait

lol, I'll think of something, and it'll be up in a couple days

hehe. yay

I'm so excited...again!