My first try in writing a fanfic. I'm new to thisthing, so please excuse me if I got anything wrong. Here we gooo!

Extraordinary Girl

Chapter 1

I sat while I heard screams.

I stayed in my place. I stayed in my place while watching someone in pain.

Someone so dear to me. My mother.

My mother has been killed. That’s how she died. I remember the day even though I couldn’t know what was going on. My stepfather murdered her. I am standing in front of her coffin, tears streaming down my face. I have lost everything. My father, mother, and house. After murdering her, my stepfather kicked me out.  I have packed up my stuff and left my house.

I watched as the coffin gets buried, my eyes flooding. I had no where to go now, no one left. I was just another homeless girl. Me, Allie the street kid.

I couldn’t take seeing my mother buried. I picked up my stuff, and ran to the place where I go to when I want to be alone. The tracks on Christie Road.

I sat down near these old tracks, ignoring everyone and everything. I sat down there crying my eyes out, not even noticing a stranger coming next to me.

“Is everything ok?” said the stranger. I felt like I know him from somewhere…

“No, nothing is fine.” I answered. “My life is ruined. I have no father, no mother, and nowhere to stay.” I looked at the stranger. He was very familiar. Those green eyes, black sticking-up hair, and that messy eyeliner.

“I’m so sorry.” He replied. “I too have lost someone dear to me. I know the feeling. What is your name?”

“Allie Simmons” I whispered.

He looked at me in a disbelieved look. “And does your mother happen to be Rachel Simmons?” He asked.

I nodded, wondering how in the world he knew my mother.

“Allie, I am your father.”



I know its short, and i think there is one fan fic with this name. constructive critisism(sp?) appreciated.  

--Last edited by rara on 2007-02-20 08:32:16 --

Very cool. Makes me a bit sad lol.

Good job, WRITE MORE.

Great job for your first fic, I really like it. It kinda reminds me of a story I read on Mibba, which I really liked. I like where this is going, and I hope you'll post more soon. It's well written and a little sad. Keep writing<333

Oh my gosh!  Cliff hanger!  I love it!  I hope you turn it into something purty!  I can't wait for more!

Moooore coming soon.. but i dont want to put them all up at once.. i want you guys to wait .. im evil, i know

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MEANIE!!!!!!!

I couldnt keep it more from you guys.. here is the next chapter!

Chapter 2

“I am your father.” He repeated. “I’m your father, Billie Joe Armstrong.”

I stood still. Did my ears deceive me?

“My father?” she asked, starting to get mad. She remembered the hard times she had. “How can you be a father to me if you never have been here? All of those times when I needed a father, I couldn’t have one, since my own one left me! You never visited me, called me, or sent me gifts on my birthdays or in Christmas! I have been stuck in this hellhole of life, barely surviving, and not knowing where my father is! Yeah, thanks a lot, you’re the best parent a girl can have!” I shouted, and started to move.

Billie held her back. “Wait,” he said. “Don’t go. I know I should have kept contact with you, but I was young back then. I wasn’t ready for that kind of responsibility. I tried to forget, but I couldn’t, and I thought your mother didn’t want me back anyways. I’m so sorry Allie; I know I should have at least called you once in a while. Will you forgive me?” he asked me, sadness in his voice.

Allie was silent. She didn’t know what to do.

“Will you forgive me?” he asked again.

“Yes,” I whispered.

There was this awkward moment where both were looking at each other in silence. But Allie broke this silence, and hugged her father. Billie got surprised at first, but he hugged her back. It was the first time Allie experienced this type of feeling. A heart warming sensation which she enjoyed.

“I love you Allie,” whispered Billie.

“I love you too dad,” whispered Allie.

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Allie left the tracks, and followed her father to home. The home she never had.

On the way, her father told her about how he eventually re-married, and he had married a woman called Adrienne Nesser, Adrienne Armstrong now. She had 2 kids, Joey and Jacob, both younger than her. Joey’s 11 and Jacob is 8. He showed her pictures, and they were cute.

The more she heard about her new family, the more she was anxious and nervous.
Will they like me? Will I be accepted as an individual of this family? She thought.

At last, they arrived at the place they call home.

“Welcome home sugar pie” Sugar pie. I like it.

He opened the front door, and went in.

“IM HOME!” Announced Billie.

“Hi honey!” rushed a woman in dreadlocks, who I assumed as Adrienne. She was beautiful. Not fat, and not too thin.

“And who might you be?” she asked. As I was about to answer, Billie answered.

“Adie, remember when I told you about my ex-wife and how I had a daughter?” He asked. Adie nodded. “Well, meet my daughter, Allie”

Adie put a hand over her mouth, and tears started to form. “Oh darling…” she started to hug Allie. Allie never felt this much loved. Tears started to form in her eyes too.

“Your always welcomed here honey,” said Adie. Allie gave her a hug.

“May I break this moment and show her her room?” said Billie, with this huge grin on his face.

“Oh yeah. Here honey, give Billie your stuff.” Said Adie, while giving Billie her suitcase.

“Follow me,” Winked Billie.

Allie followed him up the stairs, and looked around her. The house was beautiful. They arrived at a room, which made Allie give a little gasp.

“It’s beautiful isn’t it?” said Billie.

The room was painted pink. It had a four poster bed, with pink sheets. It had a dressing table, desk, and a closet. They were all white painted wood. A perfect girl’s room.

“Yes it is.” Answered Allie.

Allie dumped her stuff on her bed, and joined her family downstairs, in the living room. She met her brothers. Joey wants to be a professional skater, and Jacob wants to be a rock star like his father, which I find cute.

Billie plugged in a PS2, and inserted the game, Guitar Hero. He picked up a controller, and Allie took the other one. The game started to get more intense by every note strummed on the guitar controller. Adie, Joey and Jacob where cheering for Allie. Billie was screwing up intentionally to let Allie win, but when he noticed how good she was, he started to play intensely. After about 10 rounds, which Allie distinctly won most of, Billie and Allie collapsed in a giggling heap.

“Do you know how to play the guitar?” Billie asked his daughter.

“Yes, I do. But my step-dad sold mine” she said in a sad voice.

“Well you can always use one of mines,” winked Billie.

“I thought no one was allowed to touch your guitars!” exclaimed Joey.

“Well, did you ever beat me in this game?” smirked Billie.

“No” muttered Joey.

Allie found it funny. She started teasing Joey. She was at last part of a happy family. At dinner time, Billie told her how he was taking her to school on Friday, which was tomorrow. He told her that she was going to go to a school next to the one Joey and Jacob go to.

Allie started to think about what it’s going to be like in her new school, while lying on the bed. She was always this “emo loner” at school. As far as she knew, no one liked her, even the teachers. What if they treat her the same in her new school?

She pushed these thoughts out of her mind and went to sleep.

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Thats this chapter.. Surprises coming in the next one I'm not telling, you figure it out
Would like to know your thoughts about this chapter

I LOVELOVELOVE IT!

Very very good Rara, it's awesome. I'd love to be Billie's daughter, even if he never talked to me or anything.... More please!!

It is great!  Billie and Adie are so sweet!  Yeah, I would love to be Billie's daughter too!  I can't wait for more!

more coming tomorrow..
im going oncamping trip today.. so i wont be on much :P

ok

The next chapter has arrived! Wooohoo!

Chapter 3

Allie woke up to the sound of someone calling her.

“Allie honey, wake up,” called Adie.

Allie opened her eyes and saw Adie looking at her.

“Good Morning Allie,” smiled Adie, and went out of the room.

Allie stretched, and sat up. She has only spent one day there, but it felt as if she was there her whole life.

She dressed in her favorite outfit. A Green Day shirt and her favorite jeans. She applied some eye-liner and made her hair. Perfect.

She picked up her messenger bag, and went downstairs.

She arrived at the kitchen. Billie was reading the newspaper, Adie was fixing a fussing Jacob’s shirt, and Joey was standing next to the toaster, waiting for his toast.

“Good morning,” Allie greeted the busy family.

At the sound of Allie, Billie closed the newspaper and smiled at her. “Good morning cutie pie,”

Allie smiled back, and sat down. She was too nervous to eat, although Adie made her eat one of her home-made muffins. She ate one, and continued being nervous. Will she be accepted there? Will she even have a friend?

She continued thinking until Billie said it’s time to go.

She followed him out, and into his car. He kept comforting her about the school, but she still kept shaking.

They arrived at the school, and Allie was amazed. The school didn’t look like a school at all. It was carved in a beautiful way, and was built in the most modern design.

Billie squeezed her hand and took her to the school. He discussed stuff with the Head, and they followed him to Allie’s first class.

The head introduced her to the class, and to her homeroom teacher, Mr. Miller. She then took a seat next to a curly haired girl. As she took her seat, her father poked his head in the class and waved to her, like a parent does on a child’s first day of school.

Allie giggled and waved back. She noticed people staring at her, and noticed that the curly haired girl was smiling at her.

“Do you know him?” she asked Allie. Allie nodded. “He is my father.”

“Oh! How lucky,” she said, laughing. “I’m Sarah.”

“And I’m Allie, but I think you already know that,” Allie said, and shaked hands with Sarah.

Allie smiled, and felt someone poking her from behind. She turned around, and saw a girl with a cheesy grin on her face.

“Oh, and this is Chelsea,” giggled Sarah.

“Hi Chelsea,” Allie smiled.

“Hi Allie,” she smiled back. “It must be cool having someone as famous as Billie Joe Armstrong as a father,”
Allie shrugged. “I got used it,”

Sarah and Chelsea giggled.

“Now, now settle down class,” said Mr. Miller.

Allie was passing notes to Allie and Chelsea the whole lesson. She jumped at the sound of the bell.

“Allie, you coming?” called Chelsea.

“Yeah!” She picked up her bag and left the class with Chelsea and Sarah.

“Hey guys, do you know where is my locker?” asked Allie, and showed them the number.

“Yeah we do. Follow me!” ran Chelsea.

“Is she always like this?” Allie asked Sarah, both of them running behind Chelsea.

“Yeah. Chelsea tends to be hyper most of the time,” Sarah laughed. “It’s a pain, but I keep up with it.”

Allie laughed. She didn’t notice that Chelsea stopped, and fell over her, with Sarah on top. They landed in a giggling heap, and stood up. “Here you are Allie, this is your locker” grinned Chelsea.

“Thanks Chelsea!” exclaimed Allie and inserted her books in her locker.

“So any idea what we have next?” asked Allie.

“Sarah’s worst nightmare.” Said Chelsea evilly.

They laughed and headed to their next class. It turned out that the three of them are in the same classe. They never understood what was going on, they were just passing notes and giggling and Chelsea’s randomness.  

--Last edited by rara on 2007-02-24 06:52:33 --

hahaha, Chelsea is really hyper most of the time, eh? lol I want more!!!

hahahahahahahaha!

That is SOOOO Chelsea. hehe. I feel special now...

ITS AWESOME AND I WANT MORE

More coming soon, including more and more surprises

woohoo

YAY

YAY!!!

Great chapter!  Chelsea is so funny, and so is Sarah!  I can't wait for more!